Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Research Project


 As a fiction writer, it is important to have a sense of freedom when writing in order to maintain creativity and the desire to write. However, it is also important to make sure that although the reader may be transported to another world, that the writing maintains a sense of credibility. This paper will describe an example of how to do research for a post-apocalyptic science fiction novel, specifically post-war, futuristic post-apocalyptic writing. It may not seem like a fiction writer needs to do much in the way of research, but when considering small (and perhaps questionable) details within a story based somewhat on real science, it is important to write both creatively and accurately. Factual inaccuracies could potentially turn off readers who are interested in both science and science fiction, who would likely find the issues bothersome. The question, then, for writers of science fiction, is: how do you do the research to back up scientific or other-worldly things within a story to the extent that they are sufficiently explained for such persnickety readers?
In my case, this research is especially important because I am a female writer in a hugely male-dominated genre, so writing without research would guarantee a quick failure were I to publish my work. It is important to consider that critics within the scifi genre are also male, so the novel may be torn apart before a larger range of readers may come across it, basically damning it for all time. A male critic reading a female writer’s work is going to be especially particular about these details, writing off any inaccuracies as women’s inability to excel at subjects like science and math. Basically, backing up the facts in my novel is important not just for English Studies, but also for feminists and women in general.
As I research for such a book, I find that a large amount of the questions I have can be answered by some in-depth library research. Perhaps I want to know the extent of damage an area would sustain from a nuclear weapon, or what are some causes for a city to be covered in yellow smog. These questions can be figured out at the library, for the most part. For more challenging or detailed questions, I could consult a science professor and conduct an interview. Were I particularly focused on nuclear warfare, I may interview someone in the military or a veteran who was in the military during WWII (although, of course, these people might be difficult to come across) and get an oral history/account of why nuclear weapons might be used or what the effects are.
Considering modern society, I could also do a significant amount of research just by reading daily newspapers and watching daily newscasts (and archival research of news over the past decade). While the war we are living through may not be nuclear, it could very easily be used as background information in the story, which sets up a heightened state of war that is not only realistic, but also that the reader could relate to, which would make the writing more effective. My own memory of the 9/11 attacks, the Iran/Iraq war, and even the Gulf war could serve as information used in writing about a world that was torn apart by war. I could include autobiographical or biographical anecdotes of my peers, because everyone in our world has these types of stories to tell. This would make the writing more personal, allowing the reader to connect to it more than the rest of the science-related research I have described.
Another important aspect of my research is narrative analysis. In order to write science fiction, it is important to be familiar with the genre and to understand the history of the genre. To write in a post-apocalyptic setting, I should be familiar with the books and other media that are considered classic or great within the genre. For example, I would have to watch movies like Soylent Green and Godzilla, which were the first films to really explore the world and society after an apocalypse. Then, I would have to watch movies like Night of the Living Dead, which was the first zombie film that George Romero (the “Godfather of All Zombies”) ever directed and really propelled the genre of post-apocalyptic film into popular culture. I would also want to watch Romero’s subsequent films and many other films in the genre so that I could compare them and make notes about how the genre has changed and grown since it was introduced. Additionally, I should make myself an extensive reading list, consisting of canonical post-apocalyptic novels like Orwell’s 1984 and Huxley’s Brave New World, as well as well-respected modern literature like McCarthy’s The Road and everything by Richard Matheson, ever. It would be a disservice to the genre of science fiction if I were only familiar with post-apocalyptic literature, however, so it would serve me as a writer and certainly my readers if I became familiar with other writers in the broader genre like Ursula Le Guin, Issac Asimov, Terry Pratchett, and William S. Burroughs. While this research seems extensive, it is to my benefit that I have a 20+ year head start on the reading list.
It might, for some things, be easier to interview an established scifi author or director, but getting that interview may be impossible. However, there are ways to get closer to the people - I might attend a scifi/horror convention (such as FanExpo Canada or Chiller Theatre Expo) where authors and directors are often in attendance, such as Lloyd Kaufman from Troma Studios. In that scenario, I would either be able to take notes from a presentation the author may give, or attend a Q&A session and ask important questions of the author personally. It might even be helpful to attend presentations given by the actors that attend these types of conventions, like horror movie star Bruce Campbell for example, who could give some insight on the business and his experience with the genre. Unless my luck happened to be ridiculously awesome, these interactions may not be close enough to be considered interviews, but I may gain some information by doing a discourse analysis of the presentations and Q&A sessions. (and get my picture taken with Ernest Borgnine! Sweet!)
               

Monday, November 14, 2011

Blog 16

Ideas for research paper:

I want to go back to the blog we wrote about senior seminar ideas from the beginning of the semester:
http://jent3029.blogspot.com/2011/09/senior-seminar-ideas.html

I liked my first option, where I continue writing one of my CNF pieces. This involves doing interviewing (my mom and maybe some other family members,) and textual analysis (my old journals, news/events records from the time period to put the paper into the perspective of the era, and even the transcript of the interviews I would do.)

This isn't the best idea, but I'm kind of stumped otherwise.

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Blog 14...and 15.

Blog 14:  discuss what you did well + what you need to work on for your DA essay.  Then indicate what kind of feedback you would like from readers./Blog 15:  Post your plan for revising your DA essay

I think my plan is to fix the things I said I needed to work on, so I'm combining these two entries.


When I first wrote my DA, I spent a lot of time thinking about questions I could ask, but not a lot of time answering them. I need to work on finding parts of the transcript that back up what I want to say, and removing points from my essay that I can't back up. I also didn't write an introduction or conclusion because I didn't feel like I was really making a specific point and therefore had nothing to sum up. I need to spend some time thinking about one or two basic points that I want to make with the essay, and stick with them. I feel like I have a lot of ideas on the subject and I was too excited to talk about all of them, which would make the essay either unclear or significantly longer than necessary. So, I need to cut back and once I have done that I can write a clear intro/conclusion.


As for comments, I would love to hear what people think about the issues I am bringing up in my essay.  It might be helpful for me to get different points of view. I would also like to know if anyone thinks I am off-topic or the ideas I have about the transcript don't seem obvious to others.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Blog 13

This essay will address the relationship than women have with men in general as a society/culture in relation to the provided transcript. Why does the interview subject, A, feel the way she does about men in relation to the internet? What societal or cultural ideas have contributed to the way she reacts to male contact on the internet?
  • S so how do you think you felt about computers (when you were young- in grade school/middle school).
  • A I loved it - I loved it because, when I discovered what AOL was - that I could email my friends, put in little pictures, photoshop - all those things - and like chat with people my age - which can be dangerous. We didn't have a computer, but we had web tv. Must have been in fifth grade. And it was a slow connection and you could have a little keyboard, and you could, check your email, and you could also chat strangers - which was dangerous cause I think I talked to a pedophile I'm not sure, I I was in fifth grade I gave him my phone number when he called me I hung up I was so scared
  • S what did that experience do
  • A That was scary.
When asked about the internet, the very first thing she talks about is talking to a pedophile – she was unprompted for this type of admission, so for this information to appear so quickly in the interview shows how much impact it has had on A. Subconsciously, A must relate the internet to a scary place where old men stalk little girls. There are some serious issues that A has with trusting men and feeling inferior to men – this is the reason for her fear. On the internet, nobody can hurt you (physically) because they don’t know who/where you are – her fear is not of being emotionally hurt, but physically hurt. She would have to empower the man to hurt her (by giving her phone number, address, etc.) despite the fact that she clearly knew better, even as a child. Did she feel so fearful of men that she gave him her number anyway? What caused A to feel automatically inferior to this man on the internet, considering that she had little previous experience with the internet and no parental input on the subject?
What impact has culture had on her ideas about power (between men/women) on the internet and in real life? Or, how has culture affected A's ability to feel empowered in social situations? (the limit of "individualism" a woman can achieve in relation to media ideals (make-up, models, looking thin, etc.) and how this continues from real life to the internet via chatrooms and social networking.)
  • S making my eyes green, and fixing my cousin's nose to make it a little pointier, and then sending it to people will all the photoshop, so we had a lot of fun
  • S oh you did (laughing) you did
  • A we would make ourselves a little thinner, and that's what we did though, I think half of our albums were photoshopped, so um
In this interactional unit, A tells S about using PhotoShop to alter her appearance and send the photos to people. Although A and her friends were doing something considered relatively normal, in the context of the internet, it shows A’s continued fear of men. She as an inherent need to appeal to men and to impress them, or to feel sexy around them; even though on the internet, the men that she encounters are strangers and are potentially dangerous. Why does A feel the need to alter her image? Perhaps this is because subconsciously, she feels inferior to men or even to other women. It seems unhealthy that a young girl (presumably in her early teens at the time she is discussing,) would feel the need to appear “thinner” to older men. However, this unhealthy attitude is perpetuated by the internet with a constant barrage of media (images of women, Americanized beauty ideals, advertisements for beauty products, pornographic pop-up ads featuring women who have been surgically or digitally enhanced and presented as a sexual ideal, etc.)
Based on her stories, does A really like the internet?
It appears as though throughout her life, A has only found that the internet is a place to have fear. Although she remains anonymous in chat rooms, which gives her the ability to have different personalities each day, she still feels as though she does not have power. Despite her claims that she loved the internet and felt a certain freedom (or an environment in which she did not have to abide by her parent’s rules,) the tone and word choice throughout the interview suggest the opposite; she was restricted by her fear and by the oppressive nature of the adult men that she would speak to.
  • A well this time it's someone I know and I think we lied about our age, too, so we said, every time we were 14 we'd at 3 or 4 extra years, we wanted to sound older (small laugh) and we would change our screen name so many times, cause we're like 'ahh, we want to have a new personality today'
  • S laughing
  • A we're like "pinkgirlloves whatever" or there, like our new boyfriends name, like Angelalovewhateverhisnameis - we changed it every week. What can you do?
In this interactional unit, A further proves that she is defined by the men in her life. Her “new personality” is never defined by her thoughts or ideas, but by the name of her boyfriend at the time. She is so subservient to the male culture that she does not even realize this mistake. It is interesting that A also loses power in the second excerpt of this interview, when she is discussing what she and her friends did on the computer. It’s as though she knows she is telling S about her feelings of inadequacy, but wants to maintain a certain image of strength – i.e., she does not want to admit to feeling inadequate, ugly, or less-than-perfect. She feels more comfortable when she can blame her lack of power on men (as in the situation with the pedophile) than when she has nobody to blame her lack of power on (in the situation where she is photoshopping pictures).
It is also important to recognize A's pronoun usage as part of the discussion about power. She does not use “I”, but “we”, when talking about going on the internet to do things she should not have shows her inability or unwillingness to take responsibility for doing something "bad". But, when she uses “I”, it shows a complete willingness to point fingers at those who are doing similar things (her younger sister or the pastor's son). A tends to dominate the conversation with S, but on the internet she presents herself as having been more timid - her constant reference to danger and fear, etc. Her use of “I think” shows that she is still dealing with many of her issues.



This is an awful draft and I really need to spend more time with it, but I am not really sure where to go with this. I know we spent a lot of time in class on DA, but I feel like I need more feedback on what I have written so far before I can really continue this essay. I guess that's the point of the series of drafts? :(

Saturday, October 29, 2011

Blog 12...would you grab my sweater?

It's "drafty" writing, get it? Fun with puns! Moving on...

Right now, I’m working on piecing together the important part of the interview with the questions that I want to answer and some things I’ve already said in my notes – trying to use the interview to prove what I am trying to say. These are my notes so far. I think I will also use the Herring article (http://ella.slis.indiana.edu/~herring/politeness.1994.pdf) to help me explain computer culture and gender.

I need to talk about the relationship than women have with men in general as a society/culture, and then ask why A feels the way she does about men in relation to the internet.
  • S    so how do you think you felt about computers (when you were young- in grade school/middle school).
  • A    I loved it - I loved it because, when I discovered what AOL was - that I could email my friends, put in little pictures, photoshop - all those things - and like chat with people my age - which can be dangerous.  We didn't have a computer, but we had web tv.  Must have been in fifth grade.  And it was a slow connection and you could have a little keyboard, and you could, check your email, and you could also chat strangers - which was dangerous cause I think I talked to a pedophile I'm not sure, I I was in fifth grade I gave him my phone number when he called me I hung up I was so scared
  • S    what did that experience do
  • A    That was scary.
When asked about the internet, the very first thing she talks about is talking to a pedophile – she was unprompted for this type of admission, so for this information to appear so quickly in the interview shows how much impact it has had on A. Subconsciously, A must relate the internet to a scary place where old men stalk little girls. There are some serious issues that A has with trusting men and feeling inferior to men – this is the reason for her fear. On the internet, nobody can hurt you (physically) because they don’t know who/where you are – her fear is not of being emotionally hurt, but physically hurt. She would have to empower the man to hurt her (by giving her phone number, address, etc.) despite the fact that she clearly knew better, even as a child. Did she feel so fearful of men that she gave him her number anyway? What caused A to feel automatically inferior to this man on the internet, considering that she had little previous experience with the internet and no parental input on the subject?
What impact has culture had on her ideas about power (between men/women) on the internet and in real life? Or, how has culture affected A's ability to feel empowered in social situations? (the limit of "individualism" a woman can achieve in relation to media ideals (make-up, models, looking thin, etc.) and how this continues from real life to the internet via chatrooms and social networking.)
  • S    making my eyes green, and fixing my cousin's nose to make it a little pointier, and then sending it to people  will all the photoshop, so we had a lot of fun
  • S    oh you did (laughing) you did
  • A    we would make ourselves a little thinner, and that's what we did though, I think half of our albums were photoshopped, so um
In this interactional unit, A tells S about using PhotoShop to alter her appearance and send the photos to people. Although A and her friends were doing something considered relatively normal, in the context of the internet, it shows A’s continued fear of men. She as an inherent need to appeal to men and to impress them, or to feel sexy around them; even though on the internet, the men that she encounters are strangers and are potentially dangerous. Why does A feel the need to alter her image? Perhaps this is because subconsciously, she feels inferior to men or even to other women. It seems unhealthy that a young girl (presumably in her early teens at the time she is discussing,) would feel the need to appear “thinner” to older men.
Based on her stories, does A really like the internet?
It appears as though throughout her life, A has only found that the internet is a place to have fear. Although she remains anonymous in chat rooms, which gives her the ability to have different personalities each day, she still feels as though she does not have power. Despite her claims that she loved the internet and felt a certain freedom (or an environment in which she did not have to abide by her parent’s rules,) the tone and word choice throughout the interview suggest the opposite; she was restricted by her fear and by the oppressive nature of the adult men that she would speak to.
  • A    well this time it's someone I know and I think we lied about our age, too, so we said, every time we were 14 we'd at 3 or 4 extra years, we wanted to sound older (small laugh) and we would change our screen name so many times, cause we're like  'ahh, we want to have a new personality today'
  • S    laughing
  • A    we're like "pinkgirlloves whatever" or there, like our new boyfriends name, like Angelalovewhateverhisnameis - we changed it every week.   What can you do?
In this interactional unit, A further proves that she is defined by the men in her life. Her “new personality” is never defined by her thoughts or ideas, but by the name of her boyfriend at the time. She is so subservient to the male culture that she does not even realize this mistake.
Questions I haven’t yet worked with: When does A lose or gain power in this transcript and why? What morals does A have on the internet that may be different in person. I might use A's pronoun usage as part of the discussion about power - her inability or unwillingness to take responsibility for doing something "bad", but complete willingness to point fingers at those who are doing similar things (her younger sister or the pastor's son). A tends to dominate the conversation with S, but on the internet she presents herself as having been more timid - her constant reference to danger and fear, etc.

Saturday, October 22, 2011

This one goes...to 11.

As I said in my original analysis: I'm interested in analyzing the discourse between A and S in terms of sexuality, gender,  the relationship than women have with men in general as a society/culture, the limit of "individualism" a woman can achieve in relation to media ideals (make-up, models, looking thin, etc.) and how this continues from real life to the internet via chatrooms and social networking.

More specifically, I will answer these questions:Why does A feel the way she does about men in relation to the internet? What impact has culture had on her ideas about power (between men/women) on the internet and in real life? Or, how has culture affected A's ability to feel empowered in social situations? Based on her stories, does A really like the internet? When does A lose or gain power in this transcript and why? What morals does A have on the internet that may be different in person?

I will use A's pronoun usage as part of the discussion about power - her inability or unwillingness to take responsibility for doing something "bad", but complete willingness to point fingers at those who are doing similar things (her younger sister or the pastor's son). A tends to dominate the conversation with S, but on the internet she presents herself as having been more timid - her constant reference to danger and fear, etc. What does this prove about the power of gender on the internet and in life?

Tuesday, October 18, 2011

10 - DA - Part 2

Excerpt 1
Ch        So in 2002, you were word processing, typing papers.  But in that math class you didn't want to use that math program
M         No
Ch        Do you remember why?  What were your feelings about it, can you remember that?
M         I guess thought that I couldn't do it, I didn't trust myself, I didn't trust the computer, I was afraid.
Ch        what was it about your self that you didn't trust?
M         That I could do it, I gu­ess I didn't think that I needed to use a computer in that way.
Ch        Yeah
M         I was willing to use it to type
Ch        yeah, and what was it that you didn't trust about the computer?
M         I guess that putting all of my information in there, and trusting the computer to, you know, analyze it, the way that I could have done it myself
Ch        So you didn't think it would ah,
m         represent what I wanted it to represent.
Ch        yeah.[ pause] now go back again, so what was it, what was your resistance, if you can remember
M         With the computer?
Ch        Why didn't you want to learn it?  The teacher says we're going to do the course this way, and you rather than learning the program they gave you, that was supposed to make it easier, and that's the course where they were going to teach you and support you to use it, you you did it your own way, and that  isn't just you, that's fairly typical, so let's do some reflecting on, what were your motives, I understand the fear thing, but let's think about where the fear came from, what was it, the one you identified, about not thinking that it was going to represent what you really wanted, is a big one, that's big, but can you think of any of the other things, maybe about you, or your past experiences or[J1] 
M         Maybe I didn't relate the computer to education in the right way, that I didn't think it was necessary
Ch        mm hm, and what do you mean, like, didn't relate the computer to education?
M         I guess I thought I could go through without - without having to do this.
Ch        It seemed like something extra?
M         Yeah, and even though I guess I wasn't you know comprehending that this was supposed to make my life easier, it made it more difficult
Ch        And also, I think I'm hearing, if I'm understanding you right, you felt that learning that program didn't really have anything to do with what you needed to learn for that course,
M         right[J2] 
Ch        that you'd learn more, or better, or what you wanted, by doing it on your own
M         mmhmm
Ch        So you didn't see the program as part of what it was important to learn
M         Mmhm
[I wish I had asked why at this point]
M         I was fighting it[J3] 

Excerpt 2
Ch        that's very interesting.  OK that was your school experience beginning that fall. So then when you took the computer class, how did you feel, it was obviously different.
M         It was different, and ah, it was a fun experience because the teacher was very good, very willing to work with use, she asked us where we were all, part of the class it was you know, twice a week, once we would meet in the classroom, and the other time we would meet in the computer lab, so it was the history of computers, so we learned about the history of computers, and then it was the actual hands on, how we would use it, so and we had to do projects, each project, we had to do an excel project, we had to do a word project, we had to do what else, what other programs are there, we did excel we did word, we did (thinking) what's it? slides[J4] ?
Ch        Powerpoint?
M         yeah powerpoint and ah,
Ch        frontpate?
M         no, I'm trying to think what else, but they were just projects that we had to turn in.  So ahm, some kids knew how to use the computer but they didn't know how to use it in the way she wanted it to be used, they would zip by all their work and not do it the correct way, and maybe I was in a better situation, because I knew nothing. about you know, computers, and this was my fear, entering the information and then you press a button, and I remember , you know, the laughed at me because you would press the button and everything on the screen would disappear and I'd be like "oh what happened" but there was a way to get it back, there was always a way to get it back, so it was a funny experience and it was ah, it was kind of taught me not to be afraid, to you know, to use the computer[J5] 
Ch        good, so this course was important, in getting you over your fear
M         yeah
Ch        What do you think it was that got you over it?
M         Ahm, I guess what could happen, you know? You know[J6] , what could happen, you put your work in you press a button, and you just - what's going to happen?
Ch        So you had some assurance that your work would be there.
M         Right
Ch        that you knew how, that you knew how to what?  What was it that you learned how to do?
M         well I learned, well when I was typing on word I didn't know a lot of the different things, to use, I learned how to ah how to format, I learned different fonts, I didn't know how to use any of the pull down bars, I didn't know all of those things the drop down menus I didn't know all those things were there, I didn't know about the undo button, that's my favorite button the undo button (laughing) go back, go forward.
Ch        so let's go back to how you learned word when you learned it by yourself,
you had something you needed to do, right? and then you'd ask someone what to do.  Did you do very much exploring on your own[J7] ?
M         No.  No if I had to type, I just went in and I typed I used it like a typewriter.
Ch        But you didn't go across the menu at the top and use the hover thing so
M         No I was afraid to.  I was afraid of breaking the computer. Or afraid of what would, I never explored, I went on, went to word, opened it up, typed what I had to type, and you know.
Ch        So your process of learning word was to go in and type, and then when you needed to do something that you didn't know how to do
M         Ask somebody
Ch        Ask someone, and then, how would they tell you, or what kind of directions did you get?
M         Ah, well like where us word.  I would type in Notepad, you know, and then maybe somebody showed me, or you turn it on, and I thought that was the only program and then somebody, don't you use word?  What do you mean?  You know, so , ahm, then I would go into word,
Ch        OK so, I guess then maybe that the discussions of the history of the computer and how they were organizred and what they did were important in that class
M         probably (but doesn't sound really convinced)
Ch        Do you remember
M         yeah cause when they, well it talked about, ah fear of computers, ah well and the realization that a computer has really been around for very a long time, and we talked about the internet and we learned how to find things, on the internet, and
Ch        What kinds of things - did they tell you how to get help on the internet?
M         I think so
Ch        Did you use that?
M         No
Ch        Ok, I'm trying to figure, cause, we've skipped all these other things about friends and growing up in school, so you had this one class and ah, so then, ah you bought a computer - how did things change when you bought a computer
M         I guess then I was little, my kids[J8]  used it a lot more than I did, and I really didn't explore at first, and then I became more comfortable with it, little by little, then after I took that computer class, I took an internet course for the first time, I said, well let me try this, now that I, well I had to trying to graduate from Middlesex, to fit into my schedule, and then that internet course kind of helped me to build up my confidence, cause we had to do everything on the computer, answer all these questions had the discussion group and we had to answer all the se questions and he the teacher. It was an English course and he set up all these links to different things on the internet that we could go to, so I kind of explored a little bit that way.
Ch        So the internet course helped you to learn how to explore?
M         I guess[10] so, how to research on how to use the computer for research
Ch        did it help you with exploring programs
M         not really programs, no
Ch        So how would you learn a program now?
M         Ask somebody
Ch        You still wouldn't go through the menu bar and see what each of the tools did, and you know because you can hover over it, or you wouldn't open them up and just play with it[J9] 
M         I might, but I would probably ask somebody
Ch        Would you read somethihg
M         I would read, yeah.  I would read the help things



 [J1]Ch is saying “TELL ME WHAT I WANT TO HEAR!!” She is shaping the conversation – she has ALL of the power. M is reluctant to really divulge any information or is perhaps unsure the purpose of this interview. Although, this question is a series of questions really, and is hard to respond to because Ch says so much.

 [J2]Was M scared of you, Ch? Ch is absolutely dominating this discussion. Ch knows the answers to these questions, and M knows that Ch knows – is this a conversation that they’d had previously, but are discussing again for the sake of the transcript? Is M just a pushover? Are these answers obvious from something M already said?

 [J3]Ch says 291 words.M says 150. Ch nearly doubles M.

 [J4]Woah, M, where did this come from? Talking about feelings rather than a situation, M totally takes the power in this section.

 [J5]The thing is that M is unclear – he is timid, maybe? I think he feels nervous around Ch. His speech is kind of excited, but rushed. It’s a lot of run-on sentences and thoughts that kind of run into each other.

 [J6]And where did all these “you know”s come from? Filler/pause in thought. M wants to say the right thing. Lots of “ah” and “uh” also.

 [J7]Ch is trying to take back control of the conversation here

 [J8]This whole time, I assumed that M was male for no real reason. Now, I think M is female.

 [J9]Ch is back to trying to get a particular answer again – she is trying to shape the conversation to go somewhere else – especially in relation to the comment she made earlier, “we’ve skipped all these other things…” – she had a clear outline of where she wanted the interview to go, and it totally didn’t work that way, which is strange considering the control she had in the first part of the transcript. How did Ch lose control and why? M doesn’t seem particularly assertive.
 [J10]M says "I guess" quite a lot - why? It's usually when Ch asserst herself and tries to shape the conversation. When M is given an opportunity to discuss things casually, and begins getting into some storytelling or becomes a little comfortable, he doesn't say "I guess". Perhaps he is uncomfortable with Ch's power.

I guess I would explore ideas of computer literacy through an adult learner's perspective based on how M talks about computers/technology. If there was a video of this event, I'd like to see how M responds to Ch, what their facial expressions show, etc. I think it would give more information the actual text, especially in section 1.