Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Research Project


 As a fiction writer, it is important to have a sense of freedom when writing in order to maintain creativity and the desire to write. However, it is also important to make sure that although the reader may be transported to another world, that the writing maintains a sense of credibility. This paper will describe an example of how to do research for a post-apocalyptic science fiction novel, specifically post-war, futuristic post-apocalyptic writing. It may not seem like a fiction writer needs to do much in the way of research, but when considering small (and perhaps questionable) details within a story based somewhat on real science, it is important to write both creatively and accurately. Factual inaccuracies could potentially turn off readers who are interested in both science and science fiction, who would likely find the issues bothersome. The question, then, for writers of science fiction, is: how do you do the research to back up scientific or other-worldly things within a story to the extent that they are sufficiently explained for such persnickety readers?
In my case, this research is especially important because I am a female writer in a hugely male-dominated genre, so writing without research would guarantee a quick failure were I to publish my work. It is important to consider that critics within the scifi genre are also male, so the novel may be torn apart before a larger range of readers may come across it, basically damning it for all time. A male critic reading a female writer’s work is going to be especially particular about these details, writing off any inaccuracies as women’s inability to excel at subjects like science and math. Basically, backing up the facts in my novel is important not just for English Studies, but also for feminists and women in general.
As I research for such a book, I find that a large amount of the questions I have can be answered by some in-depth library research. Perhaps I want to know the extent of damage an area would sustain from a nuclear weapon, or what are some causes for a city to be covered in yellow smog. These questions can be figured out at the library, for the most part. For more challenging or detailed questions, I could consult a science professor and conduct an interview. Were I particularly focused on nuclear warfare, I may interview someone in the military or a veteran who was in the military during WWII (although, of course, these people might be difficult to come across) and get an oral history/account of why nuclear weapons might be used or what the effects are.
Considering modern society, I could also do a significant amount of research just by reading daily newspapers and watching daily newscasts (and archival research of news over the past decade). While the war we are living through may not be nuclear, it could very easily be used as background information in the story, which sets up a heightened state of war that is not only realistic, but also that the reader could relate to, which would make the writing more effective. My own memory of the 9/11 attacks, the Iran/Iraq war, and even the Gulf war could serve as information used in writing about a world that was torn apart by war. I could include autobiographical or biographical anecdotes of my peers, because everyone in our world has these types of stories to tell. This would make the writing more personal, allowing the reader to connect to it more than the rest of the science-related research I have described.
Another important aspect of my research is narrative analysis. In order to write science fiction, it is important to be familiar with the genre and to understand the history of the genre. To write in a post-apocalyptic setting, I should be familiar with the books and other media that are considered classic or great within the genre. For example, I would have to watch movies like Soylent Green and Godzilla, which were the first films to really explore the world and society after an apocalypse. Then, I would have to watch movies like Night of the Living Dead, which was the first zombie film that George Romero (the “Godfather of All Zombies”) ever directed and really propelled the genre of post-apocalyptic film into popular culture. I would also want to watch Romero’s subsequent films and many other films in the genre so that I could compare them and make notes about how the genre has changed and grown since it was introduced. Additionally, I should make myself an extensive reading list, consisting of canonical post-apocalyptic novels like Orwell’s 1984 and Huxley’s Brave New World, as well as well-respected modern literature like McCarthy’s The Road and everything by Richard Matheson, ever. It would be a disservice to the genre of science fiction if I were only familiar with post-apocalyptic literature, however, so it would serve me as a writer and certainly my readers if I became familiar with other writers in the broader genre like Ursula Le Guin, Issac Asimov, Terry Pratchett, and William S. Burroughs. While this research seems extensive, it is to my benefit that I have a 20+ year head start on the reading list.
It might, for some things, be easier to interview an established scifi author or director, but getting that interview may be impossible. However, there are ways to get closer to the people - I might attend a scifi/horror convention (such as FanExpo Canada or Chiller Theatre Expo) where authors and directors are often in attendance, such as Lloyd Kaufman from Troma Studios. In that scenario, I would either be able to take notes from a presentation the author may give, or attend a Q&A session and ask important questions of the author personally. It might even be helpful to attend presentations given by the actors that attend these types of conventions, like horror movie star Bruce Campbell for example, who could give some insight on the business and his experience with the genre. Unless my luck happened to be ridiculously awesome, these interactions may not be close enough to be considered interviews, but I may gain some information by doing a discourse analysis of the presentations and Q&A sessions. (and get my picture taken with Ernest Borgnine! Sweet!)
               

Monday, November 14, 2011

Blog 16

Ideas for research paper:

I want to go back to the blog we wrote about senior seminar ideas from the beginning of the semester:
http://jent3029.blogspot.com/2011/09/senior-seminar-ideas.html

I liked my first option, where I continue writing one of my CNF pieces. This involves doing interviewing (my mom and maybe some other family members,) and textual analysis (my old journals, news/events records from the time period to put the paper into the perspective of the era, and even the transcript of the interviews I would do.)

This isn't the best idea, but I'm kind of stumped otherwise.

Sunday, November 6, 2011

Blog 14...and 15.

Blog 14:  discuss what you did well + what you need to work on for your DA essay.  Then indicate what kind of feedback you would like from readers./Blog 15:  Post your plan for revising your DA essay

I think my plan is to fix the things I said I needed to work on, so I'm combining these two entries.


When I first wrote my DA, I spent a lot of time thinking about questions I could ask, but not a lot of time answering them. I need to work on finding parts of the transcript that back up what I want to say, and removing points from my essay that I can't back up. I also didn't write an introduction or conclusion because I didn't feel like I was really making a specific point and therefore had nothing to sum up. I need to spend some time thinking about one or two basic points that I want to make with the essay, and stick with them. I feel like I have a lot of ideas on the subject and I was too excited to talk about all of them, which would make the essay either unclear or significantly longer than necessary. So, I need to cut back and once I have done that I can write a clear intro/conclusion.


As for comments, I would love to hear what people think about the issues I am bringing up in my essay.  It might be helpful for me to get different points of view. I would also like to know if anyone thinks I am off-topic or the ideas I have about the transcript don't seem obvious to others.

Wednesday, November 2, 2011

Blog 13

This essay will address the relationship than women have with men in general as a society/culture in relation to the provided transcript. Why does the interview subject, A, feel the way she does about men in relation to the internet? What societal or cultural ideas have contributed to the way she reacts to male contact on the internet?
  • S so how do you think you felt about computers (when you were young- in grade school/middle school).
  • A I loved it - I loved it because, when I discovered what AOL was - that I could email my friends, put in little pictures, photoshop - all those things - and like chat with people my age - which can be dangerous. We didn't have a computer, but we had web tv. Must have been in fifth grade. And it was a slow connection and you could have a little keyboard, and you could, check your email, and you could also chat strangers - which was dangerous cause I think I talked to a pedophile I'm not sure, I I was in fifth grade I gave him my phone number when he called me I hung up I was so scared
  • S what did that experience do
  • A That was scary.
When asked about the internet, the very first thing she talks about is talking to a pedophile – she was unprompted for this type of admission, so for this information to appear so quickly in the interview shows how much impact it has had on A. Subconsciously, A must relate the internet to a scary place where old men stalk little girls. There are some serious issues that A has with trusting men and feeling inferior to men – this is the reason for her fear. On the internet, nobody can hurt you (physically) because they don’t know who/where you are – her fear is not of being emotionally hurt, but physically hurt. She would have to empower the man to hurt her (by giving her phone number, address, etc.) despite the fact that she clearly knew better, even as a child. Did she feel so fearful of men that she gave him her number anyway? What caused A to feel automatically inferior to this man on the internet, considering that she had little previous experience with the internet and no parental input on the subject?
What impact has culture had on her ideas about power (between men/women) on the internet and in real life? Or, how has culture affected A's ability to feel empowered in social situations? (the limit of "individualism" a woman can achieve in relation to media ideals (make-up, models, looking thin, etc.) and how this continues from real life to the internet via chatrooms and social networking.)
  • S making my eyes green, and fixing my cousin's nose to make it a little pointier, and then sending it to people will all the photoshop, so we had a lot of fun
  • S oh you did (laughing) you did
  • A we would make ourselves a little thinner, and that's what we did though, I think half of our albums were photoshopped, so um
In this interactional unit, A tells S about using PhotoShop to alter her appearance and send the photos to people. Although A and her friends were doing something considered relatively normal, in the context of the internet, it shows A’s continued fear of men. She as an inherent need to appeal to men and to impress them, or to feel sexy around them; even though on the internet, the men that she encounters are strangers and are potentially dangerous. Why does A feel the need to alter her image? Perhaps this is because subconsciously, she feels inferior to men or even to other women. It seems unhealthy that a young girl (presumably in her early teens at the time she is discussing,) would feel the need to appear “thinner” to older men. However, this unhealthy attitude is perpetuated by the internet with a constant barrage of media (images of women, Americanized beauty ideals, advertisements for beauty products, pornographic pop-up ads featuring women who have been surgically or digitally enhanced and presented as a sexual ideal, etc.)
Based on her stories, does A really like the internet?
It appears as though throughout her life, A has only found that the internet is a place to have fear. Although she remains anonymous in chat rooms, which gives her the ability to have different personalities each day, she still feels as though she does not have power. Despite her claims that she loved the internet and felt a certain freedom (or an environment in which she did not have to abide by her parent’s rules,) the tone and word choice throughout the interview suggest the opposite; she was restricted by her fear and by the oppressive nature of the adult men that she would speak to.
  • A well this time it's someone I know and I think we lied about our age, too, so we said, every time we were 14 we'd at 3 or 4 extra years, we wanted to sound older (small laugh) and we would change our screen name so many times, cause we're like 'ahh, we want to have a new personality today'
  • S laughing
  • A we're like "pinkgirlloves whatever" or there, like our new boyfriends name, like Angelalovewhateverhisnameis - we changed it every week. What can you do?
In this interactional unit, A further proves that she is defined by the men in her life. Her “new personality” is never defined by her thoughts or ideas, but by the name of her boyfriend at the time. She is so subservient to the male culture that she does not even realize this mistake. It is interesting that A also loses power in the second excerpt of this interview, when she is discussing what she and her friends did on the computer. It’s as though she knows she is telling S about her feelings of inadequacy, but wants to maintain a certain image of strength – i.e., she does not want to admit to feeling inadequate, ugly, or less-than-perfect. She feels more comfortable when she can blame her lack of power on men (as in the situation with the pedophile) than when she has nobody to blame her lack of power on (in the situation where she is photoshopping pictures).
It is also important to recognize A's pronoun usage as part of the discussion about power. She does not use “I”, but “we”, when talking about going on the internet to do things she should not have shows her inability or unwillingness to take responsibility for doing something "bad". But, when she uses “I”, it shows a complete willingness to point fingers at those who are doing similar things (her younger sister or the pastor's son). A tends to dominate the conversation with S, but on the internet she presents herself as having been more timid - her constant reference to danger and fear, etc. Her use of “I think” shows that she is still dealing with many of her issues.



This is an awful draft and I really need to spend more time with it, but I am not really sure where to go with this. I know we spent a lot of time in class on DA, but I feel like I need more feedback on what I have written so far before I can really continue this essay. I guess that's the point of the series of drafts? :(